Made homeless from home
Bombed city where though many
Extend an armless arm, find it harder
To hold peace than explosives
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Deeply moving heartfelt poem of great character. I cannot understand why mankind cannot live on peace and harmony. Thank you.
How sad that we have prioritise weapons of war to life preservation
This is the cry of every heart. So touches the heart and mind with sheer pain to imagine the living of a war torn city.
Dear poet, With the growing population that is effecting for pouring poisoned that is a really true thus this is a nice poem thanks
" A Child's Reflection" - a truely poetic reflection. All the world's a HOME. A LOVELY MESSAGE TO BE LEARNT. SIR!
A poem of home truths? We should not to be trusted with the Earth never mind the stars! .....well penned Yoonoos
We look to the stars to dream, when we should look down in the world that screams. This is a work that should be read by school children to see the world their parents hide.
As I sit reading this, it is Christmas day, the world outside the four walls is a tundra in which the sound of the wind is like a choir of wraiths screaming from the basement of purgatory. And yet this work touches on the fundamental realities of which I am sheltered by, that a roof is a luxury, for those who have spent life living in craters in which all they have is their humanity. you turn tragedy into an understanding.
An excellent piece of work with a great message! Appreciated the content........10
You have articulately walked us through this melancholy experience which however horrific is sadly real in many places of the world.
this poem touches every heart of humanity rightly versified 10+++++
Excellent reflection of the devastating aftermath of nuclear blast...the savagery that transforms our very dear earth into a waste land.
I love it. You gave a clear reflection of intellect. I have to give you a 10+++
War brings nothing but destruction and still mankind resorts to warfare to solve problems...The conundrum beautifully expressed.