A Child's Prattle-6 Comments

The true love among Granny and little Krishna has been so deeply and impressively inscribed. This is a beautiful devotional poem with love amazingly shared.

The very nature of humans nicely exposed in your above poem, we all are basically very possessive, even a thought of parting away disturbs us and through this conversation you did exploit that basic/ inherent weakness in all humans. Loved it... Amusing Indira ji.100+++

Drown me in your bliss In your Vyjayanti, your Bansuri too Please don't leave me alone' A true seeker of God! Surely, The flute player will come back to protect and to bless.......10

Lord Krishna has his time! Though he didn't oblige to your request to stay with you ever after, he promised that he would come again to heed to your request! You should patiently wait for him. There is a special warmth in this informal relationship between the granny and the little Krishna!

'Yashodama will be waiting for me I will tell her and at once will return'.....so lovely so pious is the poetic expression! I recollect a glimpse of childhood of lord Krishna! A beautiful poem dear madam..........10