A Child's Pain Comments

A really very good poem and beautifully written...........

talk about deep this is really good i like it. it can be taken in many diffrent ways. i will have to see your next poam cant wait. peace.

'I Do Love You' 'A Child's Pain' who could beleive Trust in 'God' and you will acheive Take from my 'struggle' how hard it was to be a Mother Acheive, Acheive 'Trust and Beleive' the childhood wounds remains the whole life through and affect us positively or negatively. it is a himalyan task to remain caring loving during parenting. relation with God alone in stressful moments make us great parents. you have begun to write. continue. do not think about what others thinik about ur writing. you are unique. you have so much to give to this world. poets are real visiionaries who fill the earth with noble thoughts. thank you