Wednesday, November 5, 2008

# A Child's Instinct... Comments

Rating: 2.5

Whenever I think of my grand daughter,
And the memories I have built with her.
I draw on them for sustenance,
When my lips are curled in grimace.
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Mamta Agarwal
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 13 November 2008

Children have natural acumen to see past & through guise, and subtle change. It is if, they have a spiritual MRI to disect the sagital view of our hearts & minds.. Which is why to this day...i always say: When or if i should ever grow up...I want to be a Child! Very poignant, and heart-warm penning, my dear...Precious moments, on display, here, indeed! FjR

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Bob Blackwell 09 November 2008

I echo Raj Nandy's words, this poem is like beautiful sunshine when it warms your heart and back. Lovely lovely poem. 12/10

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Raj Nandy 06 November 2008

Just like the beautiful sunshine, the poem is beautiful and well rhymed! When we spend time with those our heart desires, moments soon turns to hours! 11/10, -Raj Nandy

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Ency Bearis 05 November 2008

children are nice to have them....those cute little one..how I can imagine they bright your day...great concept and nice poem..thumbs-up 10 Ency Bearis

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