A Child's Heart Comments

A child's heart is really so innocent(as child to a grown up) and of course cherishes every moment spend with our mothers :)

A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

The agonizing scream of a child to enjoy his childhood, that will never come back again in his life. A moving request of freedom from a little human being to enjoy his rights and passions admiring and feeling the nature he loves so much.So touching..Cristina Teodor

A child's heart, always posses innocent softness...i like the theme and the choice of words it call all my past childish and now to reunite and sent me a calm :) it is breeze by words hahaha.. :) We never leave a child heart when we growing up, it just growing together but hope the innocent and beautiful lesson still there and stronger even one day we will have old heart... :) sweet - Unwritten Soul

Dear Santosh, I really liked to read this poem. It sketches such a paiful truth. I myself know many parents who think they know what is best for their child or children. They tell themselves that they are the experienced ones and care only for the best of thier child(ren) , but in fact hey are egoistic. They want to be proud of their children and ignore the heart wishes of their child(ren) rendering them many problems. Imposing oneself's dreams on one's children is an act of agoism rather than of love. Having written the above, I realise that all is easier said than done. Parenting is still an extremely difficult task. Selfless love is key. your poems is definitely thought provoking.

The 'Mom' in this sounds rather mean and sort of kind. I like mine far better; she is sweet and very kind. Since I have grown up she is sweeter by far than ever. I enjoy the childhood scenes you paint with the childish thoughts and ignorance. Once again, I wish you would constrain all the thoughts/lines with meter and rhyme. (Ah, but I am daring.)