Saturday, September 2, 2017

A Child's Game Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who is making bubbles to enjoy rainbows in it?
I don't know but I am sure there is an intelligent child,
He sincerely wants the bubbles could survive for ever
He truly loves the bubbles, and he is at all not wild.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 April 2018

A philosophical, thought provoking and elegantly penned poem. Yes, life is likened to a buble. Our life here on earth is just temporary. Yet, there is also life after death, an everlasting life. The last stanza is thought provoking.10

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Hassan Hayati 02 September 2017

to me this poem has many many aspects, the life, good attitude, human being in race and religion.... all valuable,

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Khalida Bano Ali 02 September 2017

A great sufiistic view of life, a thoughtful metaohor,

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2017

In a moment a bubble teaches us what our life is Bubbles break before we may give them a name... . yes, bubbles teach us about life that it is transient. In any movement it may be vanished. A nice philosophical write has been painted wisely through bubbles play by the children. Thank u Akhtar ji for posting this gem. Full vote.

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