Friday, April 1, 2016

A Child's Fate Ended While Playing Comments

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When I was immersed in evening prayers
Lighting the lamp and inscence
Uttering a few words that
God let all souls rest in peace
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v.m.saraswathy munuswamy
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Swimming in the sea of sadness! A moving mandate of our mortality!

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Very true no one knows where our fate hangs and how, let live peacefully, thanks dear

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2016

Sad story! With the ways of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 02 April 2016

Well said, he is the king makers, thanks dear

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Liza Sudina 02 April 2016

God takes everyone in His loving hands when the time is right. there are no tragedies except breaking HIs Will.

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Kishore Kumar Das 02 April 2016

a tragedy well described in your poem.....every moment is uncertain....faith in God is the only option for everybody.....

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True death Is unpredictable, let's live wisely, happily, thanks

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