Tuesday, November 3, 2009

A Child's Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Swing here, swing there
To and fro
Hold on tight altogether
We’re taking off bro?
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Noel Horlanda
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Lynn Glover 17 May 2010

This dream makes a beautiful world, Congratulations on a very beautiful poem. I traveled right along with you and enjoyed it. Thanks my friend, Lynn

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Nostalgia brought alive…into the world of kids… ‘Biblio Candy’ for Visual Candy Kids’...thanks sharing Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Jesurobo-owie Gift Imafidon 17 November 2009

Nice piece, could pass for a nursery rhymes and children can easily memorise and recite the poem.You went back to yester-years

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 November 2009

Swing here, swing there... Beautiful poem with wonderful rhythm and spontaneous flow of words true like a child's dream...10. Regards Naseer

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Ency Bearis 17 November 2009

nice poem...with good rhythmic flow.......10

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Meggie Gultiano 08 November 2009

Beautiful piece in rhythm..Ummm, I do enjoy reading..a pleasure to read.Lovely

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 November 2009

I smiled satisfied Wanted I back on air But mummified Minatory and dare........................wonderful imagery by child`s dream all with ingenuity,10+, thanks for sharing

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Walterrean Salley 04 November 2009

Beings back those childhood memories. Thanks.

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rago rago 03 November 2009

what a beautiful rhythm and made me a child to sing the song swing here swing here.........

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