A Child`s Cry Comments

children should not be crying. laughter should b heard. nice poem

read mine hear the children crying.

hear the children crying. The voice of the children crying have been taken for granted but poets will never shut their mouth for them. Thank you for writing this poem and keep on writing

we all hear the cry but we always ignore it but now with you piece we will have open our heart and act on it a job well done sir bravo work

Dear Gulsher, your words are totally true. this life is somehow wild to lots of children. but we can make a change. we can make great and perfect changes by our words. well done. you act as the humanity needs.

Had to read it a couple of times, its very potent to these times, where its expected of children to grow up to soon, we forget the suffering of others, this is a sad reminder, especially like the second stanza, we need the prayers of all men to listen and work together for solutions.

Had to read it a couple of times, its very potent to these times, where its expected of children to grow up to soon, we forget the suffering of others, this is a sad reminder, especially like the second stanza, we need the prayers of all men to listen and work together for solutions.

What a beautiful poem! Adults or child some fears are the same!

An appeal from a helpless heart to be treated with greater dignity and more warmth! ! A cry heard, here, there, every where! ! Heart rending! !

a right use of the tabs, indeed...it goes directly to the service of humanity... May God bless us all... the picture of the society is bleak, so the poem is bleak with no bright light of hope...since we are humans and we stop being positive at times, it's so natural... good poem! ! !

A very different peice from u, and one after a very long time, a touching appeal and provoking question from a child, I am a child save me from doom, The rythm is great, Well done John, thanks for sharing

Nice and beautiful, yes the things are serious matter...but to dear God, dont we have to giving up for a lil to Him. And if we are even a human take an action when we need to do, and protect children when they need....because it always stronger to protect weaker, not stronger to suppress weaker...because in future we will be weaker and they are stronger...but with love ties to all that will make a weaker become stronger_Soul

its amazingly written, im proud of you :)

I am a child save me from doom. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.