Saturday, December 17, 2011

A Child Remembers His Mother's Death... Comments

Rating: 5.0

She passed one full moon night...
Don't ask me the day...when it was...
Long from now...
A vague remembrance...of charcoal burning...burning slow anxious pain...
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Lama Abbas
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Saadat Tahir 29 June 2012

sad and painful lines for transition. loss of near and dear is o tormenting and devastating nice lines there tc

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ijlal Haider 22 March 2012

intensity of the scene is truly depicted by your words... very nice...

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Ragini Meena 29 January 2012

YOUR POEMS ARE FABULOUS LAMA.....I AM SO PROUD OF YOU......AND ITS A PLEASURE TO BE UR FRND................. :)

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