She passed one full moon night...
Don't ask me the day...when it was...
Long from now...
A vague remembrance...of charcoal burning...burning slow anxious pain...
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intensity of the scene is truly depicted by your words... very nice...
YOUR POEMS ARE FABULOUS LAMA.....I AM SO PROUD OF YOU......AND ITS A PLEASURE TO BE UR FRND................. :)
sad and painful lines for transition. loss of near and dear is o tormenting and devastating nice lines there tc