Friday, February 24, 2006

A Child Of The Future. Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the hustle and bustle of modern day living
A place full of greed and much less forgiving
In back streets and alley's, in dust and decay
A new breed of child reaches out for the day
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Graham Jones
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Brian Dorn 26 March 2006

Excellent poem, Graham! It certainly makes you ponder what the future holds? Brian

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Sylvia Spencer 26 February 2006

These words are so true, and I just loved the last line, I sometimes wonder if you are a philosopher/ A terrific poem, scores 10 for me

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Ernestine Northover 24 February 2006

Superb! Words cannot express how great a write this is. Terrific! Love Ernestine XXX

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Myra Jefferson 24 February 2006

Great poem! Didactic and prophetic, it gave me chills

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David Darbyshire 24 February 2006

Nice read Grey dave, Have a great weekend.....

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Graham Jones 22 March 2022

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