Monday, December 23, 2013

A Child Lives Comments

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A child depicts Christmas, be reminded
if your desires and appetites are wasted
on petty toys and fleeting pleasures
your soul and spirit out of control
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Doris Cornago
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Doris Cornago 20 July 2017

Amazing poem. I recall writing this one Christmas. :)

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Doris Cornago 04 January 2014

Thank you Roseann. It is so true that Christmas is all about family. We are also family here at PoemHunter and it touches the heart to have someone appreciate the message of my poem. For me, I have done well if somebody understands me. I will also read your poems to return the favor. We are sisters by our umbilical cords tied up with poetry. Do you feel the same?

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Roseann Shawiak 03 January 2014

Expression of ways people see Christmas is accurate in your poem. Truthful. Honest. Christmas is Jesus's birth to me and is all about family. Just like the holy family celebrated the birth of their son, Jesus. Loved your poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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