(A haiku)
A child is singing:
even birds stop to listen -
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It is delightful to read the work of someone who writes Haiku correctly. This is a perfect example. Irene
Haiku is so hard to do well. This is haiku at its best Regards Steve
Beautiful, indeed! You wrote it in the true spirit of Haiku - I am speechless and listening!
I loved the twist of the birds listening to a child sing. A beautiful snippet of enchantment.... Karin Anderson
yes the innocence of a childs voice is sweeter than any bird can mimic