Thursday, February 4, 2016

A Child Is Not So Helpless Like A Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

His innocent dreams,
like laser beams,
touching you,
while you are moving on the road,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2022

I love this endearing poem. Top score and to my favourites.

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Adeeb Alfateh 30 July 2019

When a child stops smiling you don't know but God also stops. Please move forward, and let someone else take your place, My fair lady! great write great 10+++

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 November 2018

When a child stops smiling you don't know but God also stops. the child is at least adding a thing of beauty to the ugly scenery, .. the presence of the children in the society and how they make our lives so fine and happy. a fine theme which we have to think of..thank u dear Akhtar. tony

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Mithilesh Yadav 08 February 2016

this small lines are like twinkling stars in the sky..... for our eyes it appers like twinkling stars and actually in the universe they are big..... big world itself.... great penned sirji

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Souren Mondal 05 February 2016

'Where adults and grownups are helpless, a child is not so helpless like a man! ' Poignant and inspiring, the poem reminded me of Wordsworth saying that the 'child is the father of the man'... Beautifully crafted Akhtar sahab, ..

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Khalida Bano Ali 05 February 2016

A beautiful poem........................................................

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