His innocent dreams,
like laser beams,
touching you,
while you are moving on the road,
...
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When a child stops smiling you don't know but God also stops. Please move forward, and let someone else take your place, My fair lady! great write great 10+++
When a child stops smiling you don't know but God also stops. the child is at least adding a thing of beauty to the ugly scenery, .. the presence of the children in the society and how they make our lives so fine and happy. a fine theme which we have to think of..thank u dear Akhtar. tony
this small lines are like twinkling stars in the sky..... for our eyes it appers like twinkling stars and actually in the universe they are big..... big world itself.... great penned sirji
'Where adults and grownups are helpless, a child is not so helpless like a man! ' Poignant and inspiring, the poem reminded me of Wordsworth saying that the 'child is the father of the man'... Beautifully crafted Akhtar sahab, ..
A beautiful poem........................................................
I love this endearing poem. Top score and to my favourites.