Saturday, May 21, 2005

A Child Is Born Comments

Rating: 4.6

Dream child dream, light
up the skies with your
laughter, let your tears
fill the ground with love,
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Show them a child will lead… lovely and earnest

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Simone Inez Harriman 18 April 2015

Yes the children know how to love so uninhibited. Love your poem David. Simone :)

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Lee Degnan 07 October 2006

Amazing poem... short and sweet, how do you make so few words mean so much? ? Awesome, David!

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Duncan Wyllie 17 January 2006

Dear David This is without a dought one of the greatest poems I have ever read Can you tell me what your inspiration was when you wrote this as it carries great depth and a lesson for us all. Love Duncan

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Louise Myers 14 January 2006

I love this small write. We should all be like little children. Lu(Kingskid)

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Raynette Eitel 26 May 2005

David, you have much to say and often you say it well, but the 'poem gods' must cringe at your spelling. You owe it to yourself to use a spell check because your poetry will be much more credible. Raynette

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Ghada Shahbender 22 May 2005

I love this poem David. Children bring so much into our lives. You express this in a very few words brilliantly. Ghada

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Mary Nagy 21 May 2005

Beautiful poem...I think kids have a great way of dealing with problems that adults could learn alot from. Great job. Sincerely, Mary

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Allan James Saywell 21 May 2005

short and powerfull with a message Warm regards allan

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David Gerardino 21 May 2005

channel,8, had a thing on about children who have no food, after watching this i thought, ......................some thing never change

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