Like hot gases orbiting round a burning star
Conjugal life starts like that of mother earth
Extracting life from their father's sunlight
Cooling and reshaping in a planet of worth
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My child! My eyes admire your pretty colors, My soul feels your refreshing fragrance You are the best among all flowers that spring superb writings superb poem superb 10+++++
Your love for children and your poetry skill is examplarily carried out in this poem Akhtar ....great work... thank you
What a great poem, such a lovely description of a mother's sentiments for her child.
Janab Akhtar Jawad You give life to a flower Born to a mother she alone knows, she is the creator of the world's firstest wonder She alone raises her head above all asunder who is the monument of this universe who sends her love for her child first she gave birth to nature’s beauty was it not her natural duty and Aktar Jawad Sahib ''aap ney toe kamaaal kardiya iss phool koe hamesha kay liye abaad kardiya'' Shukriya uss maa ka jiss ney aap koe janam diya bakee hum subh to hain fakir aapke padengay likhee hue lakeer Mahir poet you are Sir! We are only like a shooting star you alone are ‘’ankhon ka noor’’ aapkoe padney kay liye hum karengay duniya koe mujboor Khuda Hafiz Janab Akhtar Please forgive me for my half- hearted Hindi Urdu to express my appreciation for your poetry made me '' muzboor....'' Thank you
Wah wah janaabh aapney toe kiya hee hai kamaaaal I came here to PH as you had said my poetry will be liked so it is read my poem mom smiles latest comment is ''A poem great by all means, a statute beautiful from all sides, words, lines, thoughts everything is outstanding.''''
What amazing flow of lovely sentiments.....! It seems, words are flowing in a torrent while describing the beauty, loveliness and innocence of a child! You seem to be trapped by the angelic charm of a baby! Indeed a beautiful poem.....! A sure 10
When Valsa George comments like this I start thinking perhaps I have written a better poem.
A lovely poem dear poet.... just beautiful