A Child Inside Comments

such powerful words. Riding the storm mentally brings the strength not only to deal but to overcome.

Pain is unbearable really

Shedding the layers of past hurts is a very painful process, never the less is the only way to the healing freedom we all seek. Good luck in your spiritual growth and liberation. TFS

I feel like a child trapped in a body, i am so tired all the time, Awesome line... beautiful feeling....A Buddha Mind

it is so nice...............................

i feel like a child trapped in a body, i am so tired all the time, is it poss? for me to love someone and, can someone love me. problems in life that comes uninvited and how we struggle to solve it.. whatever be the circumstance........ thank u for this poem dear Sharron. tony

very Good write Poet, perfect catch of something everyone must have inside.. and the lines catched me for my situationcould i have dealt? with all the problems, in a driffrent way, all this is wrong, i feel like i what to die right now, Thanks for posting Pet.10+++!

A poem full of emotion. We all have a child, parent and inside our minds. Each talks to the other. Ps Correct spelling

A very powerful write on abuse and the self doubt that follows. Thanks for posting. A 10.

for me to love someone and, can someone love me....very powerful and emotional in words and expressions........ like this poem very much. congratulations..... but you are sure to overcome this bad feeling now........... share it with others. do not keep the pain in yourself...........Our families, customs, regulations, our own thinking and upbringing .. all play a big role in us. See everything withe the eye of your soul. make the experience a divine one.... find peace..... in meditation and prayer........ thank you dear poetess.

Great poem Sharron. Thanks for sharing. Also, congrats on being voted 'poem of the day'!

A nice poem we all keep the child within thank you

Too Share this you have strength. To have suffered this through your life must be unbearable. I see your jewellery lifts you but I hope that there is something else or someone that can give you pure fulfillment in your life.Thank You Sharron. great work.

Whoah super intense Childhood abuse? Neglect? Hope you find a happy conclusion! !

Tears, what a painful verse...I could almost hear the cracks of a little heart... Such horrible things as the abuse of children sadly still happens everyday, what can we do to stop them? What is wrong with us? How can a child be abused and nobody reads those signs? Family, community, teachers, somebody must have seen that something is not right with the child. No, it is not the victim's fault, but of the abusers and also the adults close enough to give the child a hug, look into the child's eyes and ask are you all right? We could be fooled by a nod and a mumble but if we really look through the heart's eyes we can see that something is wrong and we should dig around to seek what hurts, what is the pain of dear child? Thank you for having the power to open your heart, I hope this poem would give you strenght and answers to also those who wonders the same questions over and over. Keep writing dear poet your pen is full of strongest ink, the pain of heart with cracks. May the child find again the flow of love and smiles.

A wonderful poem! Very well written. Feel free to read my collection and rate and comment as you wish. Thanks.

Great poem and I can really feel the pain and the emotions. Touching. Now if you can edit the poem it would be an excellent poem to read with a tremendous touch to the reader's heart because some people cannot get past the spelling to comment on the pain and truth of the your heart.

A good poem, although as an old grammarian I prefer I to i.

This is a truly heartfelt peom that brings a tear to the eye

the agony has found its outlet in words... which itself has the power to heal... courageous expression!