A Child In A Man Comments

Insightful utterances well articulated and nicely penned with clarity of thought and mind.

A beautiful piece well written

A beautiful piece well-written

WOMAN MAKES AND BREAKS A MAN RIGHT..WELL WRITTEN

Nice piece of work! To talk about the very problems in the society today. Yes! A child in a man.

Love! To be like a child; able to seek for peace. Nice work.

Well written, mostly men's fathers will like girl child, mothers like male child.

You shall find always a child in man's mind to b3eahve with such kind

The children long to be praised, The children need to be reminded, The children want to be around, The loving hearts that care, In each and every man, there is a child, How true! ! dear Poetess. you are child psychologist. you are able to apply your findings to the grown up man to say that there is a child in a man. wonderful poem. thank you very much. tony

Loved the poem.There is a child in every man.I must say there is motherly instinct in every girl.It is seen that very small girls love to play mother to elder boys.

Nicepoem. find yourself in child...10 find yourself in kid try to get some lead you were innocent and lovely why not repeat same here happily?

Beautiful mam, .It speaks of your experience gained in life.Thanks for that valuable piece of advice said artistically.Especially In each and every man, there is a child, That long for the love of a mother, I just loved those lines. This is the advice of the time when girls have lost patience, might be on witnessing the elder women of their family being ill treated, and opt for divorce at the slightest provocation! Thanks for sharing mam. Please do read my poem Domestic Violence, for it conveys the same message.

Ha Ha, I love this poem! It is the truth of men for sure. I enjoyed the way you portrayed the child in men so aptly. It seems that if the man was not fully taught as a child the wife ends up finishing the job. This poem is unique and fun to read, it tickled my mind as I read it, because I enjoy the child within the men I know. Thank you for sharing this poem. RoseAnn

a good mother's role is in rearing every child as carefully as she can, something her male counterpart is not so adept in.

a good write. I love this poem full of so much truth. their is a child in all of us.

When I work, play, love, write I do not search for the child in the man, I search for the spirit which combines all. Good articulate write of child rearing and the important roles of parents who become their first and most infuencial guides.

If the women identify the child in testosterone-muscled boys and take good care of them, they will be useful handymen in the house like the kids in the aviary.. The nature of the children has a realistic description. If the women are funny with these handy tools, they will become truants and will have tantrums and be juvenile delinquents.The women should be a bit strict and funny. A psychological poem giving an idea of dealing with juvenile delinquency. Surely you would have been a responsible, caring mother in your home.

Thought provoking poem. Some people remain childish throughout their life. That is not what we want. Some people remain child-like throughout thier life. That is admirable. I try to keep consciously the dreams of my childhood alive. To many adolescents with great ideals get discouraged by adults calling them naive or childish. Ideals are not childish, not naive. If just more adolescents would keep their ideals, the world would be much better now.

Thought provoking poem. Some people remain childish throughout their life. That is not what we want. Some people remain child-like throughout thier life. That is admirable. I try to keep consciously the dreams of my childhood alive. To many adolescents with great ideals get discouraged by adults calling them naive or childish. Ideals are not childish, not naive. If just more adolescents would keep their ideals, the world would be much better now.

Must concur with Charles, and I will also add that the day I wake-up and not have that proverbial yet very realChild witin the Man', that will be the day I will no longer be a complete & happy Man! Very good storyline, astute message....Well Done! ~FjR~