Saturday, July 26, 2008

A Child Dies Comments

Rating: 4.2

Some say that childhood is golden,
As it well may be
But I have seen the gold well hidden
And racked by infant pain unbidden
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Christine Natale
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Susan Jarvis 30 July 2008

Poignant subject, perfect scansion - a professional triumph. S :)

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Greenwolfe 1962 27 July 2008

This was an advanced writing by an advanced writer. There is really nothing in the piece to criticize. In terms of poetry, I may find it wanting, but it is not wanting in the things that matter. GW62

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