Some say that childhood is golden,
As it well may be
But I have seen the gold well hidden
And racked by infant pain unbidden
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This was an advanced writing by an advanced writer. There is really nothing in the piece to criticize. In terms of poetry, I may find it wanting, but it is not wanting in the things that matter. GW62
Poignant subject, perfect scansion - a professional triumph. S :)