Saturday, September 5, 2009

A Child Beggar Comments

Rating: 5.0

a girl child,
begging in the rain,
thinks of herself
as a princess
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Ritty Patnaik 17 June 2017

thanks all for your kind comments!

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 May 2016

Her Soul Dancing Alone! Exquisite way of revealing the thoughts and life of the beggar girl. Great.

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Sreejith Kulaparambil 15 May 2010

very emotional poem.. touching the heart....

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Kannan G 24 March 2010

A poignant and tender piece of writing evoking feelings of compassion! Best wishes.

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Debasish Mishra 02 February 2010

The poem marvellously documents the delicacy of a human heart, the limitlessness of human dreams &, of course, the irreversible reality...!

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Ruth Walters 11 October 2009

Oh Ritty, what a heartfelt poem and so compasionate. You've really touched me with this poem. Ruthie

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Kesav Easwaran 04 October 2009

i like the humanitarian and compassionate elements in this write...good work Ritty...thanks...10

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Patrick A. Martin 18 September 2009

I came in to read the poems you suggested and found this I love it it has a beautiful heart.10

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Ejaz Khan 09 September 2009

A beautiful heart touching poem, well written and ends with a question. No one can answer what and who decides the fate, we all have given roles to play and should pay more attention to our less fortunate brothers and sisters in the world. Another beautiful write!

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 08 September 2009

fantastic ma'am..... uhh....awesome expression....i just loved it. i am left speechless...... absolutely awesome. thank you very much.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 September 2009

young eyes, speak of, shadow of time, yet has seen, the ego of clouds, pouring , into her dishevelled hair.....................utterly ingenious write with beautiful style and diction by imagery of cry of innocence, yet unique genre,10+++, thanks dear ritty for sharing .

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You have used such beautiful imagery to bring this poem to me Ritty. Such a sad plight for this child and you have used such empathy towards her. A very special poem. 10 love Karin

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Ron Flowers 06 September 2009

A wonderful poem Ritty. If this is a sample of your poetry, I am sure to enjoy more. Ron

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Raj Nandy 05 September 2009

What appears to be a simple daily occurrence in a place like India, -has been raised to great poetic heights through these verses! Infact that is the role of great poetry! 10! -Raj

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