A Child Beggar Comments

thanks all for your kind comments!

Her Soul Dancing Alone! Exquisite way of revealing the thoughts and life of the beggar girl. Great.

very emotional poem.. touching the heart....

A poignant and tender piece of writing evoking feelings of compassion! Best wishes.

The poem marvellously documents the delicacy of a human heart, the limitlessness of human dreams &, of course, the irreversible reality...!

Oh Ritty, what a heartfelt poem and so compasionate. You've really touched me with this poem. Ruthie

i like the humanitarian and compassionate elements in this write...good work Ritty...thanks...10

I came in to read the poems you suggested and found this I love it it has a beautiful heart.10

A beautiful heart touching poem, well written and ends with a question. No one can answer what and who decides the fate, we all have given roles to play and should pay more attention to our less fortunate brothers and sisters in the world. Another beautiful write!

fantastic ma'am..... uhh....awesome expression....i just loved it. i am left speechless...... absolutely awesome. thank you very much.

young eyes, speak of, shadow of time, yet has seen, the ego of clouds, pouring , into her dishevelled hair.....................utterly ingenious write with beautiful style and diction by imagery of cry of innocence, yet unique genre,10+++, thanks dear ritty for sharing .

You have used such beautiful imagery to bring this poem to me Ritty. Such a sad plight for this child and you have used such empathy towards her. A very special poem. 10 love Karin

A wonderful poem Ritty. If this is a sample of your poetry, I am sure to enjoy more. Ron

What appears to be a simple daily occurrence in a place like India, -has been raised to great poetic heights through these verses! Infact that is the role of great poetry! 10! -Raj