Thursday, April 24, 2008

A Child Awaits Comments

Rating: 5.0

So many little ones sit in wonderment
Sitting and waiting far, far away -
Your friends go before you
Waving with happy, hopeful faces.
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Kim Schilling
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Ahmad Shiddiqi 31 August 2008

wonderful! I like the words, So much love overflows in our family. Surely one more sacred miracle awaits us. keep writing! could you read and comment on my new poems too? thank you.

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Mamta Agarwal 24 August 2008

Kim, this is such a gentle poem full of compassion and empathy. yes adoption is a good option to rehabilitate these children. love is the only thing that we can'tsay ihave no more of it.10 Mamta

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Andrew Blakemore 21 August 2008

A very touching and most beautiful poem Kim, well done. Best wishes, Andrew

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Jeannie Ann Clark 20 August 2008

This poem is beautiful and written with heartfelt emotion and caring...thank you; you write very good. Jeannie.

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I was carried away with this poem. It's a lovely piece caring about orphans.Nice flow also. best regards, joan d.h.

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Dawn Slanker 19 August 2008

This is a lovely and sentimental tribute to a child in waiting. Very creative and unique. Touching write.

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Yani Evans 19 August 2008

this is a very touching poem

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Juan Carlos Abeti 18 August 2008

lovely, thanks you for that

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 August 2008

You have a nack of expression in the form of poem. It delighted. as you advised, I jbecame a member of www voicesnet in the name of R.M.Shanmugam, yesterday and put two poems, historical- Cleopatra's Glory and Relen of Troy. I wants your review. Thank you for your care of me Thank you, Shanmugam

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 15 August 2008

Hi Kim and thank you for your recent review of my poem. I loved yours as well and thank you for the enphasis on the family, good work. Loyd

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Ivor Hogg 14 August 2008

so many orphans wait in vain

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