Yes, Susan's comments pegged this little poem perfectly! There's nothing more precious than the wonderment of a. child first noticing it's new place in the world. A wonderful little poem you've wrote!
What indeed could be more precious than the promise of a newborn...attaching hopes and dreams to their delicate perfection of innocence personified. With each new life a chance for the world to become a better place. PEACE
A wonderful poem dear poet........ you portray here the whole innocence, loveliness and beauty and purity of the new born. lovely poem. liked it very very much...... tony