Tuesday, April 3, 2007

A Chess Game, Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

desks sit in rows
like prison bars
next door a telephone
sings hurry songs
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Ben Partenay
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Seamus O Brian 21 November 2016

Hauntingly disturbing reflection on that which we hesitate to see. Life─the vanity of vanities, creeps in this petty pace until the last syllable of recorded time.

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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 08 August 2007

Ben - I like your fractured look at fractured life, with a fractured soul! Check out my poem, If I Should Lose My Soul, and see what you think. Write, write and write. Cheryl Moyer

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Patti Masterman 03 April 2007

Awesome awesomeness; and I'm tongue tied just trying to do justice here.

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