note: iam still under the attack of the Rats WHOM THANKFULLY push my poems to be advanced in top 500.....and by the way..they come to the trap by themselves...many have been caught....26/9/09...
I close my windows, my doors and for you a trap I left in WHICH you will be caught,
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Do not worry about it dear.. You said..lol..the dirty rats.. Your cheese so dear they wast.. Hidding in the sand... i do.. and there it is..i wait.. like you..for crumbs to come.. my way from you...iip...so smile.. :)
All that really matters in the end is that you write beautiful poetry.
very much realistic approach and the way you wrote this piece is enough interesting heart feeling type..well done and hope you wil write more and more..10/10
I like your art. Good art indeed. I love ready ur fine art keep it up. 10+++
friend, some people aren't ready for some style. you're very creative and I liked this one so much...
you are just wonderful girl! i love your work. please keep it up and careless of what people say. you are great lol!
when the fruit is ripe it is beaten by many; if it is raw nobody bothers to even look at it since you are growing many may attack; pl do not get disheartened...surge ahead; you will have a glorious future God Bless You
Dear TaMaRa, your creativity is based on your work, what do you care what some narrowed minded people think, let the music plays, this is a big wold, you got my honest respect, I have many poems with not rating or comments, but that does not stop me from writing more, I simply keep writing, somebody will like it..Love and Peace, Romeo(Thanks for your valuable comments on my poems, I really appreciate, f those ratings, it is just a manipulating tool, Love and Peace, Romeo
Ha ha ha how many rats you would catch Where millions of people living as rat’s life In this world! Be kind upon them! Rats are helpless in true sense but they are Useful too! Rating and pop poppppularity is nothing for The poets who are true to their vision Poets can not dance with air air pomp pomp If poet pretentious in the end uglify his soul By himself/herself! The smell of extremism in the sign (! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !) if used too much! Energy where not? In positive and in negative too! Why you’re wasting valuable time? I always give everyone 10+ Why? Bcoz art is beyond rating! (rats know not how to rate) See, some great poet Here withdraw rating options! I salute them! Tell me about your bang thud thud in the air! Where some join Without spending a coin! Why you made your titles page clumsy Writing extra words useless! Your poems are good enough! Why this way—lo lo lo lo come come see see I am I am bla bla bla Why too much tittle-tattle dear poet tamara! Come to the point, if one say, he/she like a poem rate 2 or 3 Its his/her choice, you can not call him/her rat! Intentionally who do this, he/she just cheating his/her mind! This is virtual world! There are many tools to manipulate In a fraudulent way! In the previous post, too, you used offensive turms to your fellow poets friend that who support not you they are not true poet! Objectionable! Psychologically, it shows, inferiority complex! and Creats a friend into a foe! What you have achieved for Last one month from commotion this way! Nothing! So being a poet friend, my request to you Just let all this bla bla bla! And enlighten us with your verses With your tremendous work out! Poemhunter an amazing largest platform! So far I know this a garden of poets, not political field! Voice alike politician here can Pollute environment! In conclusion, a joke- One day tamara may say- who just click on rating option(for any number) he/she is a RAT! ****In below Noel Horlanda's comments thoughtful! Best wishes
Okay it was 7.9 before I read this peace.. now it become 8 Because I rated it ten! ! ! ! happy for you! ! 1 nice love shan
As a serious reader, I can say that it is a multi dimensional good poem.I am concern only about the craftmanship of the poem, not about the history behind it.So, the poem is a good one.
Actions speaks louder than words their actions are your answer Beats me..keep writing regards
who could be the big rat, Tamara? Well I think these rats aren't making fun of you, they just admired your excellent compositions. I think there is something wrong in the system. What I noticed was once you rate 10 on someone's work and has a perfect score of already ten, then add another perfect score of 10 it automatically reduces the points. I think too the system is just getting the average score each time one would vote. As for me what I'm interested in is only the no. of votes not the rating. I count only the no. of people who read my works. That's the important thing. I don't care the rating. So take it easy, OK?
Weird poem, I can't see where the rating is, where it usually is.8, seems like a serious poem.
with malicious intent...if, then, I would agree. if not...well. it might've been their honesty... do like your poem, however.
Good! ! ! you caught the dirty rats.I enjoyed your poem.