Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Wednesday, July 29, 2020

A Chat With My Poetry Muse Comments

Rating: 5.0

The other day I had a little chat
with my Poetry Muse. I just call him
P. M. for short, though he's not short at all
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Kim Barney
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Bharati Nayak 09 March 2023

A very beautiful write Poetic inspiration.I also very often wonder how people write thousands of poems while I struggle to write a poem for months.Some are very inspired while people like me wait for the inspiration to come.

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Kim Barney 20 May 2024

Bharati, the poems you write after waiting for your inspiration are so much better than the tripe that N.W. writes! Thanks for your comment.

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Belle Wassermeister 09 March 2023

A wonderful conversation with your muse. Brilliantly presented. To my favorites!

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Varsha M 10 August 2020

Very well written. Amazed at the poetic flow of the dialogue as it wove the story whole. Beautiful.

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Kim Barney 28 August 2022

Varsha, thank you very much.

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Darwin Henry Beuning 30 July 2020

Kim, Very nice! I hope Wes comes back to Poem Hunter! Daily, I review many poem, now and then I find a GEM.

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Kim Barney 28 August 2022

Gems are few and far between, Hank. Next one you find, please share it with me. Thanks for commenting.

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Susan Williams 29 July 2020

That was interesting- my comment was posted while I was still writing it. This is a new PH error. Anyway, I chuckled and chortled till I counted to 10+++++++++++

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Susan Williams 29 July 2020

I hope that annoying pesky soundtrack does not reappear though it might. It would be nice if this poem stuck around for a while, visited, shook hands, made some friends, before you ripped it away from us. I so enjoyed the natural charm and flow of this humorus piece

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Kim Barney 28 August 2022

Susan, your humorous comments always get at least a smile out of me. Thank you very much!

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Bill Cantrell 29 July 2020

Now this is the Kim Barney that I admire, a wounerful muse in the third person, this is proof that there are still good poems left, I usually get to 200 then start deleting many, I do have some regrets doing that as they are lost but if I wrote 10000 then your muse would every right to throw buffalo chips at me, I love this poem!

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Kim Barney 13 March 2022

Thank you, Bill, for the comment. Next time, before you delete, print a hard paper of the poem and put it in a 3-ring binder. That way you will always have it.

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Kim Barney 26 October 2022

I meant to say, print a hard paper COPY of the poem!

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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