Whole my life,
I chase a way,
Too long,
To climb a mountain,
...
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Discovering the you can catch something you thought you couldn't? ? ?
A great poem Winnie with movement and imagery of the chase and playing hide and seek. A good conclusion too as you can grasp it if you really want to! 10 Karin
a chase from mountain to waters...chasing the self playing hide and seek...good piece Winnie...10
no on e worries about actual mountains.. this seems about love.. or maybe not..seems you let one slip by :) the poem is good.. change the first line to.. my whole life..