Sunday, July 17, 2011

A Charm Comments

Rating: 5.0

My lucky charm. I've lost you
for good, in the pleats of this sandy beach,
for where yesterday you slid from my shoe
the greedy waves now reach.
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robert dickerson
COMMENTS
Rajesh Thankappan 14 January 2015

This is a very beautiful poem and a curious one at that.10/10

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Patti Masterman 04 August 2011

Gosh, this is both deep and transparent in it's simple beauty.

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Shona Rose 17 July 2011

I liked this. Its simple, sad, yet very beautiful. keep it up ^_^

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