A Changed World Comments

Strong use of imagery really paints a dramatic picture.

you could actually feel it in your heart the moment the mood shifted in this piece...a very nicely written work of art here....great work

ying yang, good bad, happy sad.. beautiful

Beautifully decribed and very poignant. I like the contrast between the gaiety of the sounds and sights of nature and the grey mood of sadness and loss. A masterly piece of writing.

This elegy of your missing Amma (Mother) ..............really very painful and it gives a lament to every heart. Indeed the greatest character in the World is Amma!

This is a wonderful poem; with enchanting imagery, beautifully flowing flowery words, feelings and a great theme. Only once in a while we can produce a poem of this class. I think my poem MY DARK NIGHTS nearly matches your poetic style in this poem........Very well done my friend. My kudos to u

Thank you for sharing...what....is one of the most painful experiences. Please find a measure of comfort in.....'Is Not Perception...Reality.' Be well!

This leaves a heart pained and holed Deva - - a sad verse which has a loss so great that no telling will soften it - - but the healer time may help - along with the freindship you find on P.H. - wishing you better days and sending hugs from friend Fay...xx

This is a powerful poem in that it contrasts the beauty and serenity with the pain and sorrow from loss reminding the reader of many important treasures both in life and in death...and the lesson learned from focusing on a problem versus on a solution...many lessons of life in this remarkably well thought out penning....bravo

Well written well balanced poem, enjoyed the read thankyou Chris 10 +++

poignant, emotional...I can feel the pain through these sensitive lines

Beautiful poignant write Deva...the imagery is stunning from your words ...thank you...Fi 10++

So much pain expressed so visualy, a true poet 10++