In the sunbathed expanse of the sky
Birds were on the wing
Now lost in the quaint net
Of limetless space
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wow, i am now totally mortified that i ever commented on your other poem. i strive to one day be able to write a poem like this. perfect in EVERY aspect and you know me well enough to tell you if it wasnt. steve
I loved reading this wonderful poem replete with beautiful images..Thanks.
Wonderfull how your poem makes everything come to life. Keep writing on my friend, love to read your work. Heavenly greetings from home Boomfriend Ruerd
lovely poem, vivid imagery and concluding lines. these brief moments of respite take us out of ourselves, rejuvenate even if short lived.10
Very profound. Especially the last stanza. May you know many such moments. Warm regards, Sandra
oh my god...your poetry is so vivid...i can almost see everything in my head everything that you have written...beautiful...your imagery is so powerful...i have literally no words!