A Change Of Mood Comments

How often we get carried away by the surroundings. I remember a very dear friend of mine, who is a great writer, goes in seclusion to a hilly place and then writes. You succeeded in highlighting your point through this poem.5****

I am reminded of Ritusamharam of Kaalidasa

We all seek strength in our lives and embrace it from wherever it may come. Wonderful poem.

I like the way you use the the contrasting weather in the first two stanzas. And then sum it up with the great impact that weather has on your feelings.I really like this poem, Jayne!

So musically and sensitively right and bright. Thank you. Jane and top of the morning to you