Thursday, February 15, 2018

A Change Comments

Rating: 5.0

The view from windows are different
and everything is changing around us
But we are same in the old state
though our view points change
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Rini Shibu
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Robert Murray Smith 09 May 2018

To be free we must always be ourselves. This poem makes us think.+++10

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Houda Boukassoula 19 February 2018

you breathe the air of their freedom But are you satisfied and happy? watching others change might bring some change to a person yet this will never be enough to change the person.Great insightful poem

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Rini Shibu 21 February 2018

Thanks Houda for your comment Rini

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 February 2018

But we are same in the old state! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 21 February 2018

Thanks for reading Edward kofi

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Glen Kappy 17 February 2018

Rini, the opening line makes me think, The view from a window is no more the whole of the real than is what the lens of a camera sees. We need to keep this in mind, yes? Wishing you all the best, GK

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Rini Shibu 17 February 2018

Thanks Glen, I think I shall write one more keeping this in mind.. Friend Rini

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 February 2018

Wow! It's a brilliant poem quite insightful! Thanks for sharing.....10

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Rini Shibu 16 February 2018

Thanks Dillip for your comment

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 February 2018

A decent psychological write ending with a good question. Thanks for sharing, Rini.

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Rini. 15 February 2018

Thanks Jazib kamalavi

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Bipasha D 15 February 2018

Approval of self is important otherwise forced change only brings discomfort. Thanks Rini for this one.

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Rini Shibu 15 February 2018

Thanks Bipasha for your comment

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Rajnish Manga 15 February 2018

Human behaviour is a complex phenomenon. Yes, we change but when it is kind of forced change 'for the sake of your loved ones' it amounts to compromise. This is the time when 'you are in state of discomfort'. Thanks for sharing an analytical poem.

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Rini Shibu 15 February 2018

Thanks Rajnish Manga for your review..

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Rajendra Rout 10 May 2018

I agree with you Rajnish sir

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 February 2018

A nice question. Let others enjoy their freedom may not make you happy and satisfied with life. Loved it.

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Rini Shibu 15 February 2018

Thanks Anil Kumar, glad that you liked it..

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Pallab Chaudhury 15 February 2018

change or be changed... A nice question at the end. Enjoyed. Thank you for sharing with us. All the best.

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Rini Shibu 15 February 2018

Thanks Pallab chaudhury..! !

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Lamar Cole 15 February 2018

This is a very thought invoking poem about change.

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Rini Shibu 15 February 2018

Thanks a lot Lamar..! ! !

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