Wednesday, October 12, 2016

A Chance Of A Lifetime Comments

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Is human life a chance
To cut and polish
The rough diamond of our soul
So that it sparkles and shines
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Rajesh Thankappan 27 October 2016

Thank you Mihaela for seeing the poem in a different perspective. However, I believe in the evolution of the soul. For e.g. Saint Mother Teresa evolved from the mundane and Saint (Rishi) Valmiki of the Hindu pantheon (who wrote the epic ' The Ramayana') was in his early life an armed robber.

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Mihaela Pirjol 27 October 2016

I interpret the question, at the end of your poem, as a reverse to the Beginning. For I believe, that each one of us is a diamond in itself, which does not need to be shaped, formed, cleaned. It is already Bright! (it is life, and its ways, and this pseudo-reality we are living in, or, taught to perceive it this way by years of different kinds of indoctrination) . A thought-provoking poem.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 16 October 2016

This poem is a thought as splendid as a diamond! (10)

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