A Chance (And Hope) For All Comments

Hello Smoky indeed we all find ourselves walking in sinners shoes hopefully we will all be held in the scarred hands of Eternity beautiful words a gem of a poem well done you

A brilliant allegorical in style poem. Deep, but I get your drift.Mankinds mortal mess will get us all. An amazing job

An enchanting and deep read, thank you

That last line pure genius..no not surprised by it, not at all! :)

Smoky, I like this because its different. Ive never read it put quite this way. Very work by a very good writer. Your friend Lynn