A Chance Comments

'His words glide like silk against soften skin' Rachel Ann Buler

'Precaution is what is needed Not some romantic lines that he will feed me' The answer to 'A Chance, ' lies here itself.

When we love ourselves, and are confident, we are interesting as there is always some mystery about us. At times, when a person falls in love, they don’t have time for themselves. Lovely lines………..10

Life is a gamble however you look at it >You must dare to win

awesome expression! ..........10

Patricia this was a warm, gentle piece of great poetry, enjoyed it.

Very well crafted verse - natural flowing style with simple metaphors created a piece we could all understand and therefore share in. Its the thing my writing struggles with.Good work

Sometimes you have to gamble to win.but beware of too polished an approach it means he has had a lot of practice.

this is indeed a world class poem right here.so captivating and beautifullywritten too. i love it a lot

Beautiful poem here Patricia suppose in every negative experience a positive one may eventually germinate you are indeed a fine writer

...as love always moves the best of me, this poem reached in and touched some emotional depths that I've hide so secretly. This is a good read. Thank you, Patricia. Daffodil

Patricia, chances should be taken, for if we don't there is always a linger doubt in our mind as to what might have happened. Great write. Top marks from me and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

Wow, this is really good... probably my favorite of yours. Very well written!

We can't help ourselves we always take the chance, in Love especially, other things maybe not. Lovely poem, Patricia.

His words glide like silk against soften skin... most men utter words of flattery yet there are few who speak the truth! Thanks for sharing. worth the 10.

Yet doth not heart bring tender spirit and tender to the soul within it and so such love frequenteth us and dabbles with romantic flush.

Matters of the heart, so delicate they are. This poem portrays thoughts that many of us have from time to time and some will make the right choice and others the wrong but whatever the choice isn't it wonderful that we had the opportunity no matter what the outcome. That's how memories are formed good or bad and we can always turn the bad ones into good by learning from our own mistakes. I love this poem, I can definitely relate to it for sure. Excellent work Patricia, a big (10) from me.--Melvina--