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deep meaning words i feel with it thanks

Nice poem i loved it 10+

ocean’s floor never dries always wet by our untiring love excited lips and hungry moves disturb the silence of the night... I love this fourth stanza, the lines are deeply etched in my mind and my heart. some sort of eroticsm, you think so? Take care...10+

very beautiful and smooth write ma'am and you are genius in making feelings into words....i loved it, many many 10+++++ rgds asif

A very well written poem.... Well executed... 10s

like the way you understand the way you comprehend the way you take in no matter what…you’re all I ever need... relation is like trees which grow when we provide nourishment in the form of appreciation..love, , care and understanding and this is very basic essence of it. there is no room for any misuderstanding and one must bealways tolerent this is how it develops in big tree...well cone and good piece of an art....10 read mine...not easy.... i miss

fantastic poem lady grace, well done 10

Lovely romantic piece with perfect imagery....10

so beautiful and sweet, i loved it! !