Monday, January 13, 2003

A Challenge To The Dark Comments

Rating: 2.9

shot in the eye
shot in the brain
shot in the ****
shot like a flower in the dance
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Charles Bukowski
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Varsha M 08 March 2021

How the soul does rejoice with the beauty of trees Shafts of sunlight from the foliage making pools of light Heart uplifted walking woodlands, seeing flowers..... beautiful words.

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Bread 77 25 May 2023

🤓🤓🤓

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Clyde King 08 March 2021

Bukowski died awhile ago. His was a life of irony, self inflicted suffering, and a desperate need to write.

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Bread 77 25 May 2023

🤓🤓

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 May 2019

" My life not their death My death not their death" Intriguing yet thought provoking poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 May 2019

One of the best poems by Charles Bukowski.......

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A powerful and poignant write. Liked the ultimate stanza. Thought provoking lines.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 May 2019

my life not their death my death not their death…touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem on Life

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2019

" Like a flower in the dance" ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 May 2019

I must soon declare my own war on their war I must hold to my last piece of ground I must protect the small space I have made that has allowed me life a very fine poem. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 May 2019

Great poem. Thought provoking about life and death.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 May 2019

my life not their death my death not their death.../// great and sublime expression

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kayla 22 February 2019

amazing i could never write like that woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow

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lunat eclipes 11 May 2018

i love it keep making them even if their are bad comments

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Shockspring 08 February 2018

Whats with the censoring

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It''s me guys... 14 January 2019

its saying shot in the but idk they cant say it?

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* Sunprincess * 21 January 2016

............my favorite line ★ shot like a flower in the dance

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nice poem but the subject is death and such sadness.

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Dawn Fuzan 11 May 2014

VNice one very good

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Brian Jani 09 May 2014

Wow this is a good one

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Rebecca Lytle 01 May 2014

And also Rachael Vacharasovan is a twit.

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Zaraya Berry 24 June 2012

i thought that this poem was pretty unusual but cool

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Adryan Barnathan 23 September 2011

You are soooooo...........stupid.......... great minds always find opposite opposition.......

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