Monday, January 11, 2021

A Ceremony Of Eternal Dancing Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the pattern of your shirts
to the deep pattern of my inner self-
I leave the colours..
for a new colour.
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Soran M. H
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Bharati Nayak 15 October 2021

Many stars to this lovely poem----added it to my poem list.

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Bharati Nayak 15 October 2021

Let me quote---I wish to collect the innocent smile that rises from faces each one makes ready for a new yesterday but they laugh at me when I write in an old tomorrow for a new yesterday

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Bharati Nayak 15 October 2021

Wow---An exquisitely beautiful poem with rich imagery.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 October 2021

WOW! What a gorgeous graphic, keenly taken! My great compliments to the photographer!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 October 2021

Very insightful poem, yet to be pondered about deeper, great thoughts here to taken very sriously by us, as the true readers of this amazing brilliant poem, solemnly worded.5 Stars full on Top.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 October 2021

Another poem of great depth. Many wonderful thoughts to ponder about. A great title. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 October 2021

Liked this wonderline line, to wit: ' all of us walk the one path but it leads to different worlds'.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 October 2021

A beautiful poem layered by many seasons, insights and wisdom. Brilliantly penned.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 October 2021

' The direction of clouds shows sings of elevation even with muddy eye they may glance at the clearness of the sky.' Wonderful and deep poetic lines showing a powerful and brilliant pen.

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