A Cell Comments

The mind sooner or later coolly firmly asserts itself to be master and not slave.. quite intriguing though, heart overrules the mind when it comes to love! Thanks for sharing, another best poem! Top marks.

Very interesting and quite a new concept with an original point of view. I am sure I have not covered all the meanings and images that your poem evokes. I find the following particularly interesting: and have more to do with a reptile that once crept in the swamp but soon finds itself in the sky held tightly by the noose by its ever scheming mind, Is this a crucifixion?

The seperation of brain and body... an interesting concept, John. Mind bending and well done! ! Brian

ain't that the truth... take care, k