A Celestial Stage Comments

Full of active and imaginative images feeding the senses and imagination. I like the ideas you create; ex., “the rains a bonus to calm” (very soothing) , and “Honouring everything with a name” (a great idea) .

Not my way of writing, but it's well done. I like it.

the contrast between our planet and the universe is superb john.. opens out a whole plethora of thoughts... xxxPenny

john - You paint a gorgeuos world indeed! I wish I could hang it on my wall like a Picasso! Check out my 'Birth bangs' sometime and see if you like it. thanks for this - Cheryl

A lovely and gracious poem and a powerful affirmation of life. I love the driving metaphor of the universe as the greatest of all performances. It flows like beautiful music.

Nicely woven - good optics.

Lovely imagery, colourful languge, thankyou for sharing your art, Love Duncan

Amazing imagery, 'Celestial stage' I never heard this word combiantion but now.... A very very good poem!

i love your descriptions and i like the idea of this poem. it was interesting

Very beautiful poem, I love it a lot