Monday, February 13, 2012

A Celebrity Died Comments

Rating: 5.0

A celebrity died on Saturday night
Though I reserve tears ducts for someone I care
Such as the millions who suffer in Sudanese Camps
and the victims that litter the streets of Duma
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Kevin Patrick
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 April 2015

Wow yes this is sarcastic and awesome. Celebrities waste money and indulge in rapacity.

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Yash Shinde 05 April 2014

.lovely poem, truly provoking and sensational...................truly insightful yet true........

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Stevie Taite 06 March 2013

I like your style of writing here. It is a provoking poem that makes a valid emotional stand! X

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Kaila George 12 June 2012

This is so true about humanity, I mean men of war are so cruel when they are being orderded by dictators that think they are god, and yes perhapes a celebrity did die, but if they are the kind of person that can touch your soul and many others with there work songs or poems then is that not worth a tear, if you look pass the profile and look into the soul then yes... I would cry for a celebrity, but they have to be the kind of person that you know you want to be like, hmmm babbling again...but very insitefull this poem.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 13 February 2012

Fame is only temporary. Depravity longs to be forever. But still the world has not chosen. Man over god I think I heard someone say. But it not a god in the religious sense. But a false idol that never should have been worshiped in the first place. I'm not a religious man by an means, some would call me agonistic in my views and opinions. But I do believe there is a god. I just don't believe in the organised religion or the church. Anyways Good Poem.

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Sharon Smith 13 February 2012

There is a reason for everything kevin. The death of that celeb. could have stopped your brother, sister, friend..from dying the same way. If you knew it did, would her death bring on a different meaning for you? Just look at how it is affecting you now! ! Yes, I agree that she is no more 'important' than those in other circumstances, just because she was in the spotlight, but ALL happens for a reason and I believe that her death will change some people's 'worlds' also.

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