A Celebration Gone Wrong... Comments

Very picturesque. The style is really interesting.

I read many of the comments written here about this piece. The bible tells us that the devil is everywhere and always trying to anger us into doing something back against the people who have wronged us. Which just adds to the hate and distruction. Senseless killing is always regrettable, whether in Waco, Fort Hood, on the USS Cole, Colombine or the Trade Centers. But one should notice that these thugs only attack innocent unarmed people. They never confront anyone who can fight back. Thanks for your story.............................Jim

How do we write a song so sad? Our world can be a fright! And what makes people turn so bad? It's news most every night.. ''Two Lonely People' is a tale of mine. Read it and you'll see why..... Like this powerful story you tell the ending can make me cry.

A stray bullet from the terrorist’s gun Just hit him and he was down His Dad bent down to pick him up But again he could not This time the terrorist’s gun Was carefully trained at him... what distardly act of terrorists.... father knowing well but still goes for son to be lifted...... tears in my eyes... read my series papa do u know and papa you too?

quite a sad one but thats the story of the world in which we live. a beautiful and creative writing. keep it up.

a superb strength of depiction of fact through story, yet poignant by the reality, how the happiness slowly creeps into the sorrows, well done,10+, thanks for sharing

Uh, uh.. that's a sad one. Almost (or really?) autobiographical..But its poignant though. Cheers. Subroto

Your story of the pup is gripping and one would want to see to the end of the poem as you have related the incident so well...........memory of 26/11........arya

wow! ! really nicely conveyed i mean the whole scenario the celebration going wrong -10 anjali

You have captured this chilling trend perfectly here Sandra...excellent write...Fi 10+++

no one could have conveyed the scene better than you, i feel i was somewhere there after reading your lines.nicely written kudos for the fine words you have used to convey your feeling. vijay menon 09850229100

Bitter feelings worded to churn the stomach in awe...excellent poem

It started out sweet then anger, Have a feeling this is true, or it just as well could be. Real hope that all terror's get their just reward.10++

A trendy poem with an ironic grim, Innocent people are the terror's victim? CP

A trendy poem with an ironic grim, Innocent people are the terror's victim? CP

Excellent narration. But at the start, the poem seemed like a funny one. But, I doubt, whether any bit of humour is necessary (like pup lifting its hands) in this kind of serious poem.......But I agree with Vaibhav, this is mind-stirring. Did this happen?

mind stirring piece.....you did an excellent job.....10

good narration, Sandra...noble is your motive behind this write...thanks...10

that was that terrible incident narrated well...we are really helpless people stuck between two varieties...the official wars also attack thr common.this is a very sad state