Sunday, May 20, 2018

A Ceiling Fan (Heart Beats With Nature - Poem By Rini Shibu) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I like the rotation of its lovely wings
Looks as if three beautiful maids
Opaque costume becoming transparent
Thanks for the naught, you naughty blades!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 02 August 2019

Congrats! A wonderful poem!

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Celiling fan leaves being dancing maids and heart throbs to the tune of nature's vibration a great thought. Congratulations Akhtarji

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Leaves of fan being dancing maids and hreart throb to the tune of nature sublime thought. congratulations dear Akhtarji

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Leaves of fan being dancing maids and throbing hearts to the tune of nature sublime thought. Congratulations Akhtarji.

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Kevin Patrick 30 July 2019

A fascinating a original piece, I do not believe anyone has possessed the imaginative alacrity to see a ceiling fan in the way your poetic eye has ingenuously devised. Its interesting how you perceive the fan, never would I have seen something naughty. So glad this was chosen as poem of the day, so that I and everyone else could read it. Wonderful stuff.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 July 2019

A beautiful poem from the pen of a great thinker and Poet. This captivating write clearly shows the power of the great Poet's imagination and thinking. How he has woven this poem synchronizing the fibers of a human being, nature and an ordinary electrical equipment is just amazing. Congratulations , Sir Akhtar for this accolade.

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Savita Tyagi 30 July 2019

This is the most lovely and creative poem coming out of ceiling fan observation. Congratulation Akhtar ji.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 July 2019

very beautiful poem JA JI WHERE IS RINI her in ages haven't since seen

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 July 2019

Lovely wings! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 30 July 2019

A highly imaginative write! I like the rotation of its lovely wings Looks as if three beautiful maids Opaque costume becoming transparent Thanks for the naught, you naughty blades! Congratulations Akhtar Jawadji for your beautiful poetry.

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Julia Luber 30 July 2019

Witty and wicked with clever observation and metaphor!

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Banamala Sen 30 July 2019

With poetic imagination, an everyday item turns into a beautiful imagery of three dancing maids! No wonder your poem being chosen as POD! Thank you.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 30 July 2019

A Ceiling Fan - three beautiful maids (three naughty dancers) ! ! ! What a creative imagination! Congratulations on your beautiful poem being chosen as POD.

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Rajnish Manga 30 July 2019

This is like exploring the scope of imagination. I am going to read the poem that inspired you to write this one. The action of a ceiling fan could be so exhilarating, is beyond comprehension. Thanks, Akhtar sahab.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 July 2019

A ceiling fan in motion made alive. Beautiful imagination. Worthy selection for the POD.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2019

Go ahead I'm in mood of watching bouncers/Dance and disturb what's becoming obstacle....wonderful expression sir! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 July 2019

wings of ceiling fan and heart beat mastermind poetic comparison...//// greatly inspired on the poem of Rini Shibu; it's great and outstanding expression; congrats for being selected this poem as POD

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 July 2019

Congratulation dear Jawad Ji for being selected this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day.

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Hassan Hayati 30 July 2019

very beautiful metaphor made by you sir Aktar. congratulations.

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Adeeb Alfateh 30 July 2019

Go ahead I'm in mood of watching bouncers Dance and disturb what's becoming obstacle With smile then read my natural oracle! beautiful poem penned beautiful 10++++++++++++++

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