A Cavern Of Gold For The Noble Comments

I loved the flow of this piece. seems like you tossed it off easily which does not take away from its' content.

it is a great poem in all senses

short precise with a captivating rhym.I loved it.

I liked your rhyming pattern that you used in this poem

This a true poem in general, I mean in literal, in a poetic mind it is also true but a different description for me. And what was true to both is that one must be righteous to see the light.

Oh what a most beautiful place to be. I could imagine this place as I read, it has a very calming effect on the reader as a soft sweet melody. Lovely

'If stealing is not their role, Danger is kept in control'....speaks the purport of the poem... otherwise sounds musical10

very imaginative and lovely voted10 surya

Lovely! Yes, a breeze can lift us high! Thanks for sharing.

I beg your pardon, that's not all right, I spelled that word wrong, the word is 'Bright'

Beautiful, lovely, exceptional, clever Fantastic, amazing, a splendid endeavor I enjoyed every word, please continue to write your message is great, and really quite brite

kkoollllllll poem u goty here... one can feel the rhymin sounds... keep on writing peace

fine poem, i like the rhyming scheme particularly (aaa...) thru out. Thanks for sharing.

yeah i can realy feel it, yeah rhymes pay a major role indeed..... that's what i can do.... i just write in free verse, i like your short and sweet, but refreshing ones, and those words speaks a lot too cheers 10++

Your rhymes lend an appealing musical flow to this well written piece. 10, for you. Sandra

A very thoughtful poem ' Danger is kept in control'.......except for the greedy! Thanks for the read ++++10 regards

Very strong poem, excellent writing! very enjoyable 10+

Beautiful written poem crafted with nice end rhymes..............10

This piece of work is brief and meaningful, lines are flawless, carefully chosen words used, well rhymed...over all - well written, excellent is my rating. Thanks