Friday, July 13, 2007

A Cautious Journey Comments

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a cautious journey
of your fingers begins
as they stumble
through the heat
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Ivan Donn Carswell 13 July 2007

Fine imagery here, ...tickles the sand/sleepwalking/through the sunlight/echoing off/the chrome... cogent and consise. A well presented poem. Rgds, Ivan

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