Saturday, June 27, 2009

A Cause Noble! Comments

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We are born for a noble cause in the world;
God has given the body with His soul to live.
A heart to feel good, bad, joy and sorrow
And a mind to discover truth and route also
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Steven Pimentel 11 July 2009

this is a good one.. your good.. can you comment my poems at less 1.. & tell me what you think

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C. P. Sharma 09 July 2009

All this together makes the world noble. CP

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an excellent poem from start...man is engrossed in stupidity...the inner self is one which has no value..or which cannot be valued...a fabulous write

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Leela Devi 27 June 2009

lofty too/ to us and all

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 June 2009

'These are lessons of Nature God shows to man To remind him of his noble birth and cause to do Best things using his full capacity to leave a mark Of his in the world to inspire others to follow suit Thereby gaining a special place in His Kingdom! ' Thoughts provoking excellent composition, love it.

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Catrina Heart 27 June 2009

These are lessons of Nature God shows to man To remind him of his noble birth and cause to do Best things using his full capacity to leave a mark Of his in the world to inspire others to follow suit Thereby gaining a special place in His Kingdom! ------ A noble cause and a noble poem made by a noble person.....Remarkable and insightful piece...Well pointed out in vividness....

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rago rago 27 June 2009

Atrocities and hooliganism are today`s world order........ heading where we cannot move further is the advise of all......... political impulses and false promises are ruling us........ let the Kingdom flourish........

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wise poem..very well expressed

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