Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, July 27, 2010

A Cause For Pain Comments

Rating: 4.0

Love can cause so much pain
Full of worries and so much strain
Complete derailment of train
Only losses and not so much gain
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Darshna Chopra 06 August 2010

Love can cause so much pain Full of worries and so much strain... can cause lots of pain....10

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Hans Vr 02 August 2010

Vey clearly stated. What we love most can hurt us most as well. Well done, great poem.

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Okan Emanet 01 August 2010

A breathtakingly excellent characterization on the structure of love and resulting pain... I really congratulate you on such a wonderful work.... a real 10 from me...

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Danielle Pongi 31 July 2010

This poem? my favourite(: thanks for posting.

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Chand Shikari 27 July 2010

ied all the time till we got married It was necessaciated but hurried I made a blunder and not queried.. can cause so much pain....10

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Maulin Shah 27 July 2010

Full of worries and so much strain Complete derailment of train Only losses and not so much gain....... nice poem to be read One must be prepared as it is certain all the way.......10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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