Tuesday, September 11, 2018

A Cats Paw Comments

Rating: 5.0

It tickles my fancy watching the cat tickle fish, which reminds me of your fishing for compliments.
a complimentary book landed on the door mat.
pouncing on it like a cat, which strangely pounced on it too.
we tugged at war and wrestled each other, paper shredded.
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Bri Edwards 25 January 2019

i've once more run across this gem, but did not score a run upon crossing the gem. you, however, have! ! ! once more i choose to use this in a showcase: Feb.2019. Thanks. bri (:

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Bri Edwards 24 September 2018

(cont.) a favorite 'line': whilst you oh light of my light which I do not say lightly P.S. if really dinners, then: your dinners ARE in the cat ha ha. and a few other grammar 'errors' i'll 'ignore'. i LOVE THE POEM. to MyPoemList, and to October's showcase. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 24 September 2018

Cat's? ? ;) so off to the coffee house, not a house made of coffee but a sales outlet...might this be a bit o' humour! ? and not electric outlet humour! ! ! ...is still fed up and eyes my sandwich with beady thieving eyes...i got a minuscule laugh from this, but it was a friendly laugh; thanks. (cont.)

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