A Caterpillar Comments

I think that you are a beautiful poetess (and a lady bug from another poem ( :) . Nice descriptions, direct expressing of your thoughts in a way concise and understandable.

this is a great write ivy.

A brilliant image captured effectively in verse.

Cool poemo Ivy... Take care Roger

I like this one a lot! !

Well, how about that for a fresh new way of looking at life and the instincts within us (ambition, desire, hope) to give it meaning! Fantastic poem which has made me look at poems in a whole new light! Warm regards, Gina.

i enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing regards

i liked the way you conacted realty with fantasy, it is a new idea talking about caterpillar transference as a beautifull imagination well done i hope for success and happness thanx

I like that you've done something NEW (to me) with the caterpillar/butterfly image pair. Most of your poem read itself to me, which is high praise! I feel so happy to be clicking people's new poems on this site, and finding poetry, not doggerel!

But only the imago can reproduce because the pupa becomes a soup