Thursday, June 8, 2023

A Cat And Fish Show Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a corner of the fair
there was a cat with a stare
watching a fish in a bowl
It swam like a joyful foal
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Juhaina Shiraz
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Nabakishore Dash 09 June 2023

Good fight to have read in your beautiful art, but watching the show would have been much more pleasant.

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Nosheen Irfan 08 June 2023

So beautifully penned. Love the rhyme and rythm. The theme is unique and the way you have handled it is just amazing. Bravo!

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Poetic Sky 08 June 2023

Not easy under watchful eyes to takeaway the fish. Nice metaphors used.

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