A Castle Of Sand Comments
I remember the time when I was a kid,
When we played Knights and Queens hand in hand.
We dreamt of a kingdom, we decided to build
A marvelous castle of sand.
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A delightful poem it makes the reader feel the sand in his hands, tree houses or castles are all childhood memories thanks for the nice feel poem+++++10 regards
Very enjoyable read about childhood bliss and adventure. hugs, Dee
A wonderful poem! Wonderfu is the imagery, very nicely composed with due care. I love it and added 10 to it.
«And finally we built the castle of sand» yes, it is beautiful … poetic history, it will be pleasant to reader to recollect … 10 …/Thanks …
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7/25/2025 10:19:35 PM # 1.0.0
A lovely narrative poem, well articulated and nicely penned. The piece took me down memory lane, as I recalled how we built huts, bridges... using whatever kind of soil was available for us as we lived very far from the coast. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.